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You keep my feet on the ground by =ChristofLehmann:iconChristofLehmann:

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I frankly admit
That I’ve been hit
By disaster a couple of times.

But you should admit
That I’d never quit
When I am facing hard times.

I know that you have your troubles
With showing your feelings to me.
But honestly spoken my hard is broken
About the way you seem not to see.

That I am a man who does what he can
To build up a home for you too.
And again I am looking through my mail
And again there is no message from you.

I give it to you that you are someone
Who keeps my feet on the ground.

I give it to you; you are so good at it
If I was near water I’d be drowned

I would be drowned
I would be drowned
I would be drowned

I frankly admit
That I have been hit
By disaster a couple of times.

Now I’m telling you
And hope you get the clue
That I won’t repeat it this time.

I know that you have your troubles
With showing your feelings to me.
But honestly spoken my heard is broken
About the way you don’t seem to see.

That I am not sure my love can endure
That you give no clear message to me.
So if I must choose I choose not to loose
So Baby I guess you can see,

Can see that

I give it to you that you are someone
Who keeps my feet on the ground.

I give it to you; you are so good at it
If I was near water I’d be drowned

I give it to you that you are someone
Who keeps my feet on the ground.

I give it to you; you are so good at it
If I was near water I’d be drowned

I would be drowned-------
I would be drowned-------
I would be drowned-------
I would be--------- ---------
Drowned


© 2007 and 2009 Christof Lehmann  All rights reserved
Rock Ballad 4/4
Length app.2 min.50 sec.
©2007-2009 =ChristofLehmann
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Submitted: December 9, 2007
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(c) 2007 & 2009 Christof Lehmann - All rights reserved

Rock Ballad 4/4 th with a very swinging beat. I will submit the chords for this one soon.

Hope you enjoy this one.
Basically it is about being in love and not feeling to be appreciated.

A Chinese proverb says.

The three hardest things in life are to be in love and not being loved back,
To sleep when you can´t fall asleep
and
To wait for someone who will never come back.
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~KryssBranzi:iconKryssBranzi: Dec 11, 2007, 6:26:41 AM
wow. the thing i like about your lyrics is that they're meaningful. i hate some people's because theres no meaning behind them yeah they're well written but theres nothing if you no what i mean? i really enjoy reading your work.

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=ChristofLehmann:iconChristofLehmann: Dec 12, 2007, 7:10:14 AM
Thank you.
What I often attempt in writing lyrics is this :

Use a feeling, a situation or event. Then dig inside your own emotions about it. Then try to convey the message in words that are "universally" understandable.

It´s pretty easy, first you have made an effort of really working that way.

:hug: Christof Lehmann

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~KryssBranzi:iconKryssBranzi: Dec 12, 2007, 2:29:53 PM
i tend to be upset or somthing when i wrote and the rest just comes out of my pen... lol :hug:

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Everyone wants to be whole...
~Purple-Fearie:iconPurple-Fearie: Dec 25, 2007, 7:47:10 PM
aw....

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=ChristofLehmann:iconChristofLehmann: Dec 26, 2007, 6:25:13 AM
aw? ;)

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~souldoll:iconsouldoll: Apr 9, 2008, 5:23:01 AM
I kinda imagine things happening when I read this.. so full of emotion... :)

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=ChristofLehmann:iconChristofLehmann: Apr 9, 2008, 7:20:10 AM
Thank you.
Well yes, lots of people seem to have that kind of feeling at certain times in a relationship.

Thank you for the favorite and your comment.

Christof Lehmann

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~Shawn-Reed:iconShawn-Reed: Apr 14, 2008, 11:26:45 PM
This feels so much like something I want to say to someone right now that I'm surprised... I really pissed her off so much, and she means so much to me, and she's blocked me and is giving me the cold shoulder... this is really close to my heart right now. I question a couple of your word choices as to whether they are spelling errors or meant to be as they are, but I acknowledge how it could work either way. You write good lyrics, sir.
=ChristofLehmann:iconChristofLehmann: Apr 15, 2008, 9:17:16 AM
Thank you. The craft of writing lyrics is to convey emotions and themes in universally understandable words that make it easy to identify oneself with it.

I am glad you like my work.

Christof

Don´t get drowned but don't , as YOU say, "piss her off" either ;)

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