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I am holding my tears
I am cutting my loss
I am counting your lies
But the numbers stay gross

I am breaking your photo
I drink my own blood
I swallow my pride
And I laugh at the cut

You are under my skin
But I won’t let you in
you are a weak man

You keep asking me why
And the moment I try
You make me cry again

I love you I hate you my friend

I will always love you
For all of my life
I will always love you
You make me feel life.

I always forgive you
Whatever you do
I close my eyes
And all I see is You

I love you I hate you my friend

Come on here we go again

I am holding my tears
I am cutting my loss
I am counting your lies
But the numbers stay gross

I am breaking your photo
I drink my own blood
I swallow my pride
And I laugh at the cut

You are under my skin
But I will let you in
I am a weak man

You keep asking me why
And the moment I try
You make me cry again

I love you I hate you my friend

Come on here we go again
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(C) 2009 Christof Lehmann - All rights reserved

Lyrics by Christof Lehmann
Written for Heavy Rock / Metal (question of definition)

Words go with a medium fast 3 / 3rd + 1 3rd beat

The basic rythm to this work is 3/3

Yes you are right, a WALZ. 3/3 goes really well with Heavy Rock Heavy Metal Music. :-) If you never paid attention to it , Try.

It is about emotional conflict. Love, feeling mistreated, forgivenness, self blame and concept of self.
A rather universal inner conflict based on misery.

Pretty common, so it probably has a broad audience. ;-)

Regarding this song as well as others or lyrics on demand, concept collections of lyrics for CD, musical etc please send inquiry by e-mail.
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:iconunderworldriver:
~underworldriver Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! :heart:
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:iconchristoflehmann:
Thank You. I´m glad you enoi my work.
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:iconunderworldriver:
~underworldriver Apr 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: you are very welcome.
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:iconconnyvaughan:
Absolutely true,( referring to your article about writing lyrics )
This song is really conveying universal emotions in a universally relatable context and language. It´s also quite independent of cultural context. Thank you for the article by the way.
Your songs
Universal Scapegoat and
Our Choice of Love
are also really good examples of this technique.
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:iconchristoflehmann:
Thank You :) Yes, Our Choice of love is a particularly good example of that technique. ;)
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:iconconnyvaughan:
Yes - I´d love hearing you sing it some day ?
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:iconchristoflehmann:
hmm - I should have a band or make a guest appearance if there´s a concert. Maybe - Not impossible though I am not really performing much any more Conny. I´m 50 and getting married soon lol ;)
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:iconconnyvaughan:
Yes yes yes - I have heard that before - from you too :D ( not the getting married part though - wish you really all the best, and by the way, looking at your latest songs, one can only envy your girl, and probably one can envy you too for having found someone who gives you that kind of inspiration.
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:iconchristoflehmann:
Thank you - now you made me blush again ;)
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:iconconnyvaughan:
Oh did I - well blush again then - this is a great piece of music !!!
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